(I attempt at haiku)
I pause from pithy
prose and my dry doggerel
to write bad haiku
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Ages pass it seems
until the one asks you how
you have felt lately
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A jaundiced moon beamed
down on old 101
and she rode with me
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I watched her recede
and walk away out of sight
the sun was way harsh
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Mid happy chatter
I rise for a quick breath
of isolation
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Thought that burns right through
the fabric of a subject
like a cigarette
7 comments:
ha, jaundiced indeed it was last night! Cute and playful haiku.
The last one is the best.
The prolific
blogger takes a
pregnant pause.
so natural at it
he needs not try hard
it comes from within
Thanks all.
I was going for the 5-7-5 syllable rule, which I understand from some more look-up, is not necessary.
"Thought that burns right through
the fabric of a subject
like a cigarette"
"Ashes of a mind
lay scattered
by uncertainty"
so much said in such easy manner! left me half way...was that the intention?
yes :)
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